Put up gameplay on youtube, looking for feedback.

[ztrimble]

Hey everyone,

I recently decided i was going to put up some game play onto YouTube but i want to do it right. What do you guys think and what can I improve on? Personally, I think I was a tad nervous commentating over gameplay and my intro could use a little bit of work.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kXV_PWELTHA

Thanks in advance if you want to give feedback


link to page: https://www.youtube.com/user/MrUltraGumby

 

[bigcyco1]

Your link does not work for me.

 

[ztrimble]

Your link does not work for me.

my apologies, i fixed it

 

[ztrimble]

I've put up two more games that i think are even better now.

 

[bigcyco1]

Pretty cool.