What do you think of this video?



Kinda harsh Chunk...but so funny!
 
Normally the music and rap would be better. I did not like the song either. But do to a time crunch and lack of good equipment It was not that great. I have an album coming out called REV IT UP. Hopefully it will be out sometime next year.
 
There is not enough variation in your "instrument". (sorry for the poor vocabulary...)
And you sing it with a monotone voice, I wanted to stop listening after one minute. You need more variations.
And I'd love to read your lyrics, because I do not understand everything.