This review is seriously flawed. "Shuttle's X27: Can Atom Handle Vista?" Here are the problems with this article as I see it:
1.) No Vista 'Windows Experience Index' tests performed.
2.) The last paragraph of the introduction should relate to the title of the review. "Nevertheless, we’re curious to see if Shuttle’s translation of the Atom platform yields a system that not only saves power, but also gives you a usable desktop PC and offers real value at a time when century-old financial institutions are tanking two at a time" does not coinside with your article title "Can Atom Handle Vista?"
3.) No comparison of applications on different OSs. A computer isn't worth much if doesn't run any applications; so while the article is supposed to center around Vista's performance, one must include application benchmarks. While you have done that, you've neglected to add comparisons of running the same application atop different operating systems. Gimp will run on Windows XP, Vista, and many flavors of Linux; that would be an excellent way to tell if the Atom can handle Vista. I'm sure your other readers could suggest a whole suite of application benchmarks that would run on numerous operating systems including Linux.
4.) Page 4 - Test Setup and Benchmarks: "The purpose of this piece is to review Shuttle’s X27 ... [and decide] if you can fit a micro-ATX platform in your application." No, as you stated earlier, the goal of the article is to "...see if Shuttle’s translation of the Atom platform yields a system that not only saves power, but also gives you a usable desktop PC and offers real value..." or was it to answer the question "Can Atom Handle Vista"?
5.) The Conclusion: "Let’s start with the bottom line, first. Shuttle’s barebones X27 and pre-built X2700 are physically attractive mini-ITX platforms that lack the muscle to serve as everyday desktops." They lack the strength to serve as everyday desktops? All desktops? But you haven't tested when the Desktop OS is Windows XP or Linux. "The 1.6 GHz Atom 230 just doesn’t have the strength to drive Vista." What you've proved in this article is that the Atom 230 doesn't have the strength to run these applications. You've not generated any data to support that it can't run Vista. "Multi-tasking is a foregone conclusion nowadays and the Atom just can’t handle it in Vista." Where were your multi-tasking benchmarks?
To fix this article, you should make the three different purposes the same: The title of the article, the last paragraph on the Introduction page, and the "purpose" given on page 4 - Test Setup and Benchmarks. You should also completely redo the conclusion / discussion as your statements contained therein are not suppored by your data.
I offer the following links about writing Lab Reports to assist you in your next review:
http://chemistry.about.com/od/chemistrylabexperiments/a/labreports.htm
http://www.mhhe.com/biosci/genbio/maderinquiry/writing.html
http://staff.gps.edu/McConnell/Toolbox/labreport.htm
Each of the above articles stresses different aspects of a Lab Report. By reading all three you should have a good idea of how to write a technically correct report.