Video Intro Critique

[TheOfficalTanner]

Looking at getting into the youtube scene! tell me what you thing about my intro!

all feedback is good feedback

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dMQgTzXdkQE

 

[Titillating]

I liked that! As far as an intro goes, it looked pretty good. The opening seconds had a bit of a Tron feel, which was pretty cool. I think you could use a different text for your name at the end, it's not difficult to read but it could be clearer. Other than that, you could try to shave a second or two off it, but that's just my need for instant gratification speaking haha.

 

[TheOfficalTanner]

I liked that! As far as an intro goes, it looked pretty good. The opening seconds had a bit of a Tron feel, which was pretty cool. I think you could use a different text for your name at the end, it's not difficult to read but it could be clearer. Other than that, you could try to shave a second or two off it, but that's just my need for instant gratification speaking haha.

Thanks! I used cooltext.com to generate the text so ill have to tweak it to make sure its right, then when the text dissolves thats when the next video comes into play, that way it seems shorter. I appreciate the feedback!!

 

[ssddx]

i like the music.

i like the line zig zagging in the intro.

i dont like the box... why is there a box.. what purpose? instead of a box i think it should be an outline of your logo. if you dont have a logo.. then make one. i think it should also be color coordinated with the beginning of your intro... not strange and wacky colors.

the text is also not fitting to the application. i'm thinking something boxy like these http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=301 or futuristic like http://www.1001fonts.com/techno-fonts.html ideally you would have a line scroll across like the intro... then create the text for your name as it moves (works if you used a box font). or perhaps if you used a different way to introduce your text.

i like the look and feel but i think you can certainly improve upon it a bit. perhaps i'm just picky since i used to be a graphic designer.

the length is perfect. keep it that length.

 

[Best Answer]

I dont how it goes from grey to black so fast maybe make the transition smoother but overall its great.