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ONLINE VGA HELP FILES ... Phase 4 Review
Brief Comments:
Tim has released the Phase1 HTML documents that the group made comments
on. I am now editing Phase2 & Phase3 comments made by the group for Tim
(Running behind due to events in real life).
PHASE4
Phase4 shall review the following 31 to 40 Help files:
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/hotsheets.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howattack.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howcheat.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howfighters.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howfind.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howhappy.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howhost.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howmaster.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howmine.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howmoney.htm
Please reference the URL in your reply to indicate which help file you
are referring to.
The Online Help Files can only be improved with your Help.
Mission Statement
Now that Tim is proactively trying to go GOLD with VGA Planets4 and
cutting down on introducing new features and concentrating on just Bug
fix releases, maybe we should do our part as Beta testers to help Tim
in cleaning up the Help files?
There is a total of 166 files in the Online Help and I shall be posting
10 pages every 7 to 14 days (depending on feedback and size of files)
asking the group to review and post back comments with the following in
mind:
1) Grammar: Grammar or Typo Errors found in the Online Help Text
2) Context: The Help file is ambiguous or misleading and the text
should be rewritten. (Posting a paragraph of what the Help file should
say would be very helpful here)
3) Textual Bug: The Help File differs from what happens in VGA Host.
Be it a textual Bug or an actual Bug, either the game or the
documentation must be changed to compensate before Go Live.
4) Enhancement: With the many new Host changes over the past few years,
many new features may not have been included into the Help File and
maybe should have been. Please state them so that they can be entered.
I shall collect all the comments and post the updated HTML file(s) on
to Tim, who, shall have the final say on what is included into the
Online Help Files. This task is to help Tim concentrate on fixing Bugs.
ONLINE VGA HELP FILES ... Phase 4 Review
Brief Comments:
Tim has released the Phase1 HTML documents that the group made comments
on. I am now editing Phase2 & Phase3 comments made by the group for Tim
(Running behind due to events in real life).
PHASE4
Phase4 shall review the following 31 to 40 Help files:
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/hotsheets.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howattack.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howcheat.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howfighters.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howfind.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howhappy.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howhost.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howmaster.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howmine.htm
http://www.vgaplanets.com/v4doc/howmoney.htm
Please reference the URL in your reply to indicate which help file you
are referring to.
The Online Help Files can only be improved with your Help.
Mission Statement
Now that Tim is proactively trying to go GOLD with VGA Planets4 and
cutting down on introducing new features and concentrating on just Bug
fix releases, maybe we should do our part as Beta testers to help Tim
in cleaning up the Help files?
There is a total of 166 files in the Online Help and I shall be posting
10 pages every 7 to 14 days (depending on feedback and size of files)
asking the group to review and post back comments with the following in
mind:
1) Grammar: Grammar or Typo Errors found in the Online Help Text
2) Context: The Help file is ambiguous or misleading and the text
should be rewritten. (Posting a paragraph of what the Help file should
say would be very helpful here)
3) Textual Bug: The Help File differs from what happens in VGA Host.
Be it a textual Bug or an actual Bug, either the game or the
documentation must be changed to compensate before Go Live.
4) Enhancement: With the many new Host changes over the past few years,
many new features may not have been included into the Help File and
maybe should have been. Please state them so that they can be entered.
I shall collect all the comments and post the updated HTML file(s) on
to Tim, who, shall have the final say on what is included into the
Online Help Files. This task is to help Tim concentrate on fixing Bugs.